'Words move, music moves
only in time'
(TS Eliot 'Burnt Norton')
Thursday 3 April 2008
Stitch Up
I tried to stitch you together again - just as you were - but all I could see was a yellow chick with a human eye, flapping its wings as it tried - unsuccessfully - to fly. I cannot erase that waddling gait and yellow webbed feet.
What a wonderful job. We can't change who someone or something is just because we want to. I think if we tried it would take away from their uniqueness. Keep up the good work. Have a nice day.
I tried to stitch you together again
6 comments:
you are what you are... i cannot make you whole... oh... i loved this.....
What a wonderful job. We can't change who someone or something is just because we want to. I think if we tried it would take away from their uniqueness. Keep up the good work. Have a nice day.
I like this, it works well with the image
Very nice indeed - small, succinct but with a deeper layer. Not a word wasted.
Very nice indeed - small, succinct but with a deeper layer. Not a word wasted.
You convey a lot in this poem. I agree with chiefbiscuit. Nicely done.
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